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Review:SereneChaos says:
Eep! I'm so excited to see where this will go! I think it's cool that you have Fleur's point of view here, and I like that you have her dialogue actually with French sprinkled in it. The only thing that I would do to make that part better is to provide translations at the end of the fic in an author's note so that us readers who don't know French can look it up afterwards to understand the bits and pieces Fleur has been saying.

I think Monique is a pretty funny character and I'll look forward to reading more of her! My suggestion for this chapter would be to make sure you proofread your work, because there are a healthy sprinkling of grammatical errors (mostly missing apostrophes and punctuation) which can be distracting. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the rest of this!

Author's Response: Thank you, I do need to go through and reread and write this whole story it's been a while since I wrote it now

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