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Review:nott theodore says:
Hello!

The opening of this chapter was great, like usual. I don't know how you always manage to write such brilliant chapters! But I loved the interactions between Terry and Tor, and him trying to reassure her that she has nothing to worry about as far as Leanne is concerned. Then, just when they're about to get a sweet moment, Michael Corner comes in and then Tor has to use the Polyjuice Potion to avoid them being found out. It really made me laugh!

Ah, it was great to finally see the prank! It was so elaborate and well thought out that I was very impressed with their skills and desire for revenge - I almost felt a little sorry for Griz at times! But it was a great prank, and I can imagine Fred and George approving!

My only CC in this chapter is that I thought it a little odd to see that a Muggle's name was used as the Slytherin password, since they're notorious as a house for not liking Muggles. The spacing was a little strange as well, so you might want to fix that. Overall, though, another great chapter!

Sian :)

Author's Response: Hi again! :)

I'm glad you liked the scene with Tor and Terry, and having to escape from Michael! It was so funny to come up with and to write their panic, Polyjuice potion is just the best plot device to work with. :P

Haha, I'm so happy you liked the prank, I really enjoyed coming up with it. I felt sorry for Griz as well, since that would be pretty traumatizing, but she did do some pretty awful things as well.

That's a good point about the password, a few people have actually pointed that out. I imagined that the wall itself wouldn't be prejudiced against Muggle poets, and maybe that Tor had read Frost in the books Terry gave her, but I'll try and clear it up when I go back and edit this chapter. :)

Thank you for a wonderful review, as per usual my dear! :D


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