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Review:Roots in Water says:
Hello there! (again)

Another Quidditch filled chapter- and this time we got to see how she interacts with the rest of the team!

I enjoyed reading this chapter - it was nice and light and very amusing. :) Ella shouldn't feel bad about being late - it was Al's fault for not giving her better directions. How was she supposed to know that they met in the back rooms before heading out onto the field? And to choose such a hidden location... No wonder she had difficulty finding them!

The practice itself seemed interesting. The Seeker drill had obvious use, as did all of the others, and I really liked how you used the drill to allow for conversation between her and Finn. It was nice to learn more about the team (though I can't promise that I'll remember all of their names just yet).

Their conversation also answered one of my questions, which was why she hadn't tried out for Quidditch before. I can understand wanting to practice more before trying out - but four years of practice is a lot. Maybe she also had to build up her confidence. :P

I'd say that I was surprised by her outburst at Finn, which came out of seemingly nowhere, but I think that it fits in with her personality, which is already making itself evident. As well, Finn's comment was just a little too pointed for her to ignore. Geez- what is it with people underestimating a female's athletic ability? :P

I would have been interested to see more of the practice, though. It seemed short, and I didn't get a great grasp of how a typical practice would go. it would have been great to see more of their drills and to see how Al acts and directs as their captain... But I suppose there's more time for that later. :P

All in all, this was another enjoyable chapter and now I'm off to read the next one! Good work! :D

Author's Response: (for some reason I skipped this review whilst on an answering spree this summer...) so THANKS A MILLION (again) for your awesome reviews! I hope you've been keeping up with the latest chapters, and I can't wait to hear what you have to say about them!!!

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