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Review:ValWitch21 says:
AH I JUST FLAILED BECAUSE I READ THIS AGES AGO AND LOVED IT BUT COULDN'T FIND ANYMORE AND YOU'RE THE ONE WHO WROTE IT.

Ahem, my fangirling aside, why do you write everything so well? First of all, the sister relationship in this story. I don't know if it's based off anything you know, but it is just perfect. As an older sister, the 'I know better than you do and will force you to do things my way' attitude is one I know well (though obviously I have yet to Imperius my brother), and the 'be quiet and stop meddling with my life' is one I've seen more than I wished to.

Then, there's the overall darkness of this. Daphne is a monster! I suppose she thinks she's helping Astoria, but the way she smiled at the end gave me the creeps and made me feel that this was more about being right.

Anyway, I'm so happy I found this again!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm blushing right now. Like most people, I like compliments. :P

I'm glad Daphne came off that way to you - I wanted to portray their relationship (and Daphne herself) as more than a little creepy and problematic, though I wanted to leave some of it open to interpretation.

Thank you so much for the lovely review!


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