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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
AAAH THIS IS THE SADDEST THING! ANDROMEDA FICS ALWAYS ARE THE WORST BECAUSE SHE LOST SO MUCH AND AHHH THE FEELINGS AND CREYZ ... I'M SO SORRY!

But seriously, she did lose her husband and her daughter and her son-in-law, as well as her sister (and that would still hurt, I reckon, because maybe Andromeda had wanted to be finally friendly with Bellatrix before her death - I don't know, maybe some kind of resolution). And that's why Andromeda fics are the worst.

But obviously they're the worst because of that and not because your writing, which is very good and it is your skills as well as general Andromeda-ness that resulted in tears on keyboard. Your imagery, you choice of words and sentences, the second person tense - all great and brilliant and wonderful. Such a good job.

I also love how you've explored the idea of Metamorphagi. I tried to do it with Teddy as well in one of my stories, and it is really is difficult to grasp. I loved (italics for emphasis, because I think this bit was the best) how you mentioned Tonks/Teddy's interest in what they actually look like - and, how they discovered that beauty did not equal happiness. Gahh, such moving stuff.

OVERALL IT WAS WONDERFUL, WELL, WELL DONE!

Author's Response: Hahaha thank you for the review. I'm sorry that I'm replying to it embarrassingly late. This was a story that I wrote very quickly, in about one sitting, just because Andromeda's voice worked so well and I could see everything so clearly in my head. I'm glad you liked the bit about Metamorphmagi wondering what they truly look like-- I was proud of that one.

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