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Review:nott theodore says:
Gosh, it's been far too long since I left a review on this story!

I really like your portrayal of Blaise Zabini. With what we know about him from canon - and particularly his family - the idea of him being a Narcissist really fits. While at first I did think it was just Pxyis being jealous of Daphne - maybe he had a crush on him in the same way Tor has a crush on Theo - this is such an interesting twist. It seems like something he would believe in and something that is also quite plausible. I've actually never seen this in any story before, so it's really unusual. You're also opening up a lot of possibilities - after the predictions in the last chapter, I'm now looking at everyone Tor is close to in regards to how likely they are to die! The idea does seem a bit ridiculous, but with Tor able to prevent the death of someone she loves, I can't dismiss any possibility in this story. You're messing with my mind!

Terry is such a great character! Even though he is a little idealised in Tor's eyes at the moment, I love the fact that he sticks up for what he believes in and he's someone who's making Tor think about and question what she's always been told as far as Muggles and Muggle-borns are concerned. I think he can only be good for her - but then what if him being with her leads to his death? Oh no, you've really got me questioning every single thing that's happening here!

Ginny is one of my favourite characters, even though she doesn't appear that often. Her portrayal is so consistent with the character we see in canon, and I love the fact that she, like Terry, sticks up for what is right and what she believes in; it's good for Tor to encounter as many broad-minded people as possible, so that she actually starts to think about these things herself rather than blindly believing in everything her parents have told her.

Onto the next chapter!

Sian :)

Author's Response: Can I just say how amazing it was to see all these reviews? :D Really, you're too wonderful, and your support for this story means so much, I always love hearing your thoughts! :)

Now, onto actually responding to this review! I'm glad you liked Blaise, and didn't think Pyxis' theory was too hair-brained. Well, it is a little silly, but I'm glad you think it makes sense and is maybe plausible. I'm glad you're asking these questions and wondering what will happen, that's the funnest part about leaving these hints and predictions. :)

I'm glad you're liking Terry as well! He's such a fun character to write, though I agree that Tor does look at him with slightly rose coloured glasses. Yes, Tor is definitely starting to question and change, and Terry is a great influence on her.

Hearing that Ginny appears according to canon is really great to hear and very reassuring, since I really want to get her right. She's one of my favourites as well, and I love giving her and Tor a strange kind of friendship.

Thank you for a really lovely review and your awesome feedback my dear! :) You're the best!

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