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Review:Trundlebug says:
Ah the Weasleys, they are just the best, aren't they?

We are both in this challenge and we both drew Weasleys. Isn't that so fitting that for a family-themed challenge we are both writing about THE wizarding family. It just makes sense.

Your story is great and Molly is such a wonderful character to write. I have personally never written from her perspective, but I hope that if I did I would capture her as well as you have. A lot of writers might find mothers to be somewhat unflashy or uninteresting because they are largely defined by their children, but that isn't so and you and I both know that. Molly isn't defined by her children, as you so aptly show here; she is defined by love and a caring streak longer that would put the care bears to shame. You've got it there, and you did it justice.

I love her thoughts about her family (Arther, the twins, the older brothers and Ron) because her thoughts of them mirror what we all know about them, but they do it from a point of view that lets us see them a little differently.

A very nice story and a good glimpse into one of JKR's best.

Author's Response: Hi there!

The Weasleys are an absolute joy to write about. I'm glad to hear that I did some justice to Molly Weasley's character. She truly is the kind of mother everyone can fall in love with. It was so lovely to hear your thoughts about this one-shot. Thank you for stopping by to not only read this but review it as well!

All the best,

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