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Review:NightStar says:
Omg nice I liked this!

what you expected, eh?)
Sirius and Gemma are so cute :3 Its adorable!
And your descriptions girl! They're very very
effective! Like this one for example:
"Sirius Black knew the exact location of every
freckle on Gemma Rawnsley’s body but still felt
the same intense desire every time she took off
her clothes. She was a breath of fresh air and
he couldn’t help but continually crave her
ethereal spirit. Her joyous giggles and playful
nature literally made him weak in the knees."

Way too good. How do you write so well? :O

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter so this
review's just gonna have to end at this short
note. Sorry xD

With loads of love,

Author's Response: Haha, I must admit, I was not expecting you to say you love Marianne! But I'm glad you like her. I do too XD Hopefully you'll like her a lot more when you get to the next chapter in her perspective!

To be honest, I don't really know where those descriptions come from. I've never taken a creative writing class so they kind of just happen ... I sit down and just type whatever I'm thinking. It's really interesting to write the boys that way because my head usually gets stuck in the gutter, ha! I also have a nice thesaurus to look at, so that helps the writing process too :D

Thank you so much for all of your reviews, I really really really appreciate them!

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