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Review:NightStar says:
Hi! Long time xD I apologize. I've been a little busy :P (plus, this site seems to have died :( There aren't many people coming on!)
Anyway,
I can see it took you an effort to write this chapter. But you did your best. Both Aeryn and Peter seem to be very annoying and difficult to write so kudos to you for doing such an incredible job!
You write so amazingly well that I look at my one and only story pitifully. XD Really. I love your flow of words and your vocabulary. Its beautiful :')
Only criticism, you're making us wait too long o know these two character's real motive D: Its agonizing! I mean this in good humour, so don't actually take it as criticism!
Either way, 'lurve' your story and I can't wait to read more of Gemma and Sirius!

With love,
~NightStar

*OFF TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!*

Author's Response: Oh no need to apologize! I understand real life comes before fan fiction ;)

Yes, Aeryn and Peter are annoying to write, but as you'll see in later chapters, they are essential to the plot. So in the beginning, they are annoying, but as you get towards the chapter about the Winter Ball, you'll see what I mean XD

Awww, don't look at your story like that! If you want, I could take a look and review it for you if you need some advice! And to be honest, I've never taken a creative writing class, so I have no idea where my writing style comes from. And I can't take all the credit for the vocabulary either ... my Microsoft Word thesaurus is my best friend :D

And as I said before, you'll learn more about Peter and Aeryn as things move forward :D

Thank you for your reviews!! I'm going to respond to all of them tomorrow, as I have to go to bed soon to get up early for work. But thank you thank you thank you!


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