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Review:luvinpadfoot says:
Ooh another great chapter! In fact I liked this one even better! (Sorry this is late, I sometimes forget to check when my favorites have been updated. And while I'm in parentheses I need to apologize for thinking her name was Jessica. I don't know why I thought that. It's obviously Ellie.)

I'm really liking this story a lot! Ellie's really interesting, for all her friends think she's not a color. And the other characters are just as vivid. I'm looking forward to more of Wood and the twins, I'm sure they'll try to sabotage her somehow.

I like the tripping in heels bit. That was funny and so, so true. Everyone's done. We just all hope we've done it privately haha!

I'm interested to see how Ellie is going to get to Alicia's definition of a color- and who she's going to hook up with. Maybe some Ellie/Oliver is in the future? Maybe that's just me making stuff up. It'd be interesting though.

I'm really curious to know what happens at the party! It sounds like it could be exciting to say the least. Please don't keep us in suspense for too long! It's just torture, I want to know what's happening with Ellie and the bet!

I'm definitely Team Ellie. Just to prove that people can be whoever they want. And I'd have no problem with what the boys would have to do if they lost. ;) Granted I'm only reading it, but still.

I really do love this story! It's so good and you're such a great writer! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!! haha and i'm sure we've all had that embarrassing moment where we face plant in heels, i know i have.

i'm not really sure whats going to happen between Oliver and Ellie. Idk if i want them to go somewhere or not. You'll see in the next chapter exactly what women mean to Oliver and idk if i should have him change or not... choices, choices.

haha i also might change what the boys have to do if they lose, but i don't have any ideas unfortunately. :(
you have any??

now i'm only waiting for the next chapter to be validated, it was rejected once for fowl language, go figure right? but it should be up pretty soon!!


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