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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! It's me once more, of course. :D So, let's go over things:

Plot: So marvelous. I'm awful at CC with you. You're just too good at writing! I really like that Angelina is working for the Quidditch magazine. That seems appropriate. And Lora is gonna marry Michael the Muggle! Yay! I really loved that Angelina went to make peace with George. I wish he'd been there...but I trust Fred to tell him everything that happened. :) It's odd because I know they don't get together for several more years, but I'm still rooting for it every 1996 chapter. Silly. :) But I really liked that she talked to Fred (no, don't die, I love you!) and that she admitted her feelings to herself. But how dumb that now she thinks she should move on! NO!

Characterization: I don't even know why I talk about this anymore. You know how amazing your characters are and all I do is blab on and on and on about how much I love them. :P But I'll continue to rant about it because maybe it will encourage you. ;) So I really liked Angelina in this (of course), but I also was really fond of Alicia and Lora. I love that they're both really distinctive. They're clever. :) And I like that I can tell the difference between Fred and George! Sometimes people act like they have the exact same personality and they don't. So I was fond of seeing some Fred-moments. :) He was my favorite of the twins until this story. Now you're making me like George more!

Descriptions: So lovely. I really liked how haunting Diagon Alley is during this time and you really captured that well. I felt like I was walking with Angelina. Eerie.

Emotions: Ahhh, tell me about emotions, man! It was so sad when Angelina was talking to Fred. When Alicia had scolded her over not having closure, it made me so sad. I was like, "HEY! What type of friend says that? Shut up!" and then Angelina went and talked to Fred and I saw how sad she was and just...wah! So sad...(which is sort of funny because this contrasts so much with the 1999 chapters!)

Interactions: I spend all my time in love with everything every character in this story does. I loved the girl-talk at the Leaky Cauldron, of course, but I think my favorite was the conversation between Angelina and Fred. They're really good friends and it breaks my heart that I know he dies. WHY, JO ROWLING, WHY?!

I have nothing else to say. I just love this. :) Congratulations on writing a beautiful story. I can't wait to read more.


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