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Review:gingersnape says:
Oh my goodness Jami this is so raw and powerful in the way it unfolded and made me totally and completely haunted by Tully's struggles and the things she saw then and the thoughts of what she must have seen before. I loved how Tully wasn't a radical and she didn't get to break free because of a hppy coincidence, but she still did everything she could in a way that put her in danger but seemed totally in character.

The Death Eaters were horrifying but described so carefully that all the fear and hatred that runs through Death Eater culture came so naturally to how it played out in my head and they contrasted with the order effortlessly. The differences in regard fro human life were disturbing, especially regarding the baby, but the way it was laid out fit perfectly with their canon characterizations.

From start to end, I felt like I was just sinking into the story and it all unfolded around me, rather than being something that took effort to focus on and pay attention to. On the technical level, I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes and thought it was a really well done piece overall

Author's Response: Hi lovely!

As much as I wanted Tully to have a happy ending, it just didn't seem realistic. Whatever magic holds them to their masters, just wanting to escape didn't mean hers would break. Having her die felt like a mean but realistic move. Poor little elf :(

Ahh I'm so happy you liked the death eaters!!! I really wanted to make them chilling, so I'm super excited you though they were horrifying!

Writing something that people can just read and not feel like it's a struggle to get through is one of the biggest things I try and do, so your last comment really made my day. Thank you so much for this amazing review ♥

Jami


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