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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
What a chilling piece. I really liked it and I really liked some of the short sharp sentence structures that you had going on it just seemed to harsh and really added to the affect of the story.

I felt sad, and to be honest I'm not sure I can pinpoint why! But I loved the style you were writing with and the use of italics helped me differentiate the times and what was happening now and what was happening in the past. Great flow going on and I really love the way you write. Plus I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes - lovely short story!

Author's Response: Hello :) Thanks for reading.

I'm glad you thought this was chilling-that's exactly what I was going for :) I understand what you mean by you felt sad, I felt that way when I was writing too, I think I felt sorry for Mrs Crouch.

I'm really glad you liked it, this is my favourite of the stories I've written. Thanks so much for the lovely review :)

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