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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! It's me again. :) So, let's go over things:

Plot: Another lovely chapter! I can't even mention how fond I am of George and Angelina. Everything you write just makes so much sense. I feel like I'm reading canon. :) Are you secretly J.K. Rowling? Anyhow, I adored the birthday celebration. I'm so happy that George fit in so well. He's really getting better at being able to talk about the war without getting upset. And I LOVED that he's becoming closer with Percy! That made my life. :) I don't think Percy gets enough love, so thanks for that.

Great Line: "Don't do anything Eunice wouldn't do." It made me laugh out loud. :) I just thought I should mention that. What a weird lady!

Characterization: AHHH! I have no words for how spectacular your characterization is. Percy was perfect and I absolutely love that you mentioned Audrey. And George is so...George. He's just amazing. I love that everything that happens seems believable to me. Angelina and her family were so charming. Reminds me of my own crazy family! But better. :) And just...it's all perfect. Everything is perfect. Man, I'm useless at CC with this story!

Descriptions: I think maybe I could have used more details about how places and people looked, sounded, etc. (Look, I'm attempting CC!) What you have works wonderfully, but I'd like to be "in" this chapter more.

Emotions: I could really feel the happiness at the end of this chapter. I hope she agrees to move in with him! They're so perfect and sweet together. It just makes me smile like an idiot.

Interactions: Let's see...I've already mentioned it, but I loved the Percy/George scene. LOVED George with the Johnsons, especially Mr. Johnson. I like the idea of them getting along. George fits in so well to chaos. I don't even think he could handle something calm. :)

You are perfect. And amazing. And this story rocks! I'll read the next chapter ASAP!

--Emily

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