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Review:teh tarik says:
This story is amazing. This is my first Gellert/Ariana, and I have to say, you've convinced me of the pairing. You've shown a softness (or "sentiment" as Gellert would have put it...:P ) about him, a vulnerability and a gentleness to his character, which is very strange and fitting at the same time. He may be the next Dark Lord, but right now, he's so fragile in his sense of loss and grief.

This was absolutely heartbreaking, and there were so many things I loved about this story, despite its length.

He ran his still-bloodied fingers through his slick golden hair. He hated it long, yet refused to cut it. He hadnít cut it since her heart stopped beating. He cursed sentiment harshly under his breath.

Brilliant characterisation here. There is both a harshness and a frailty and misery about him that you've conveyed so eloquently wihtout lapsing into melodrama.

"ďDo not go gentle Gellert," her voice rang through his ears.

These are such beautiful words.

This was a beautiful story, and you should be proud of it.

-teh

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