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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello! I really enjoyed reading this. I love the Founders, and this is a unique take on them. The writing style you explored works really well, with the switching POV's, and I loved that it switched mid-sentence- like they're thinking the same things from across the room. The personalities you've ascribed to each of them are really good too. But I think my favourite aspect of this piece is that although nothing actually happens, everything happens, just in a glance (if that makes sense). It's a very stylistically beautiful story and I loved reading it! Great job!

Author's Response: Kristin, hi! I'm thrilled that you picked this story to review--it's one of my favorites :). I wanted their thoughts to echo each other, and this was the way it all ended up flowing. I wasn't sure how it would go over, but several people have seemed to like it. So glad you're one of them! And yes, it makes perfect sense to say that a lot happens without anything actually happening :)

Thank you so much for reviewing! It means so much!


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