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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

Oh I really liked reading more about Eilley and Carr - they seem to have a really great friendship! Again, I thought your dialogue was well written. I liked how this conversation conveys the closeness of the two - they were both confessing private things, but sharing it with each other. I was surprised about Carr liking Fred - it'd be interesting to see where you go with this minor(?) or maybe major, side plot, and Eilley liking Scorpius! I notice Scorp hasn't really come into the story yet, so it would definitely be really awesome to see what kind of a character he is in your story! An enjoyable read~

- Charlotte/maskedmuggle
House Cup 2013

Author's Response: I KNOW! *Head down in shame...* I will have him appear in chapter five I swear.. I wanted three and four to go together but I thought the gypsy tent should stand alone. The friendship with Elliey and Carr is just like two that I have IRL so it is just so easy to write.
I hope to see you again!
XOXOX,
LLG


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