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Review:SereneChaos says:
OH MY GOSH! What a brilliantly written drabble. I think you did a fantastic job highlighting how Neville and Hannah's relationship progressed, and am doubly impressed by the fact that you did it in so few words. The little details (such as Neville spending a year drinking substandard coffee) really make the story come alive and make it unique to you, the author. I especially loved how subtle you were about some of the other things (such as Neville rolling over with a velvet box in hand) without having to explicitly tell us what happened. This was so sweet! Good work!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for coming by!

I really love my details, and they were kind of the focus of this story. It was interesting to play with the imagery of sunlight and morning, too. I didn't want to blatantly write a proposal story but just kind of hint at Neville and Hannah having a nice life together after the war. Obviously, there's much more about them that's still left to tell :) I'm glad you enjoyed this drabble, though!

Thanks for your kind review!

-Amanda


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