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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey again!

So like I thought, there was another Albus/Eilley interaction! Lol at Albus' nickname - like I said, I really like the individuality/uniqueness of Eilley's character - she's a bit unusual, but it's a type of unusual that's fun! The dialogue was well written, which is great, since it took up the main part of this chapter. I thought perhaps you could have spent a bit more time explaining how they came up with the counter attack and set about doing it - it seems a bit short, but it was fun to read about anyway. Haha at the ending.. let's see how they get their way out of this one!

- Charlotte/maskedmuggle
House Cup 2013

Author's Response: Yeah. I read a few fanfics where they pick on Al by calling him Allie- Ricecake was invented my my friend Mckenna because she is my Vanilla Wafer... Elliey is probably how my future child will act because I am the same way...

I will add onto the prank and explain it- there were a few requests to already.. I'm thinking mission impossible music and green and black war paint.. Maybe some crying firsties... Well thats all for this review!

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