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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

I actually thought this was a really great opening chapter! I really enjoyed getting to know Eilley - I found her characterisation very appealing and likeable. I also really liked the way you wrote this - sometimes the introduction to the characters, outlining their background, who they are.. can get a bit tedious, but I thought you made this really interesting - I was really engaged throughout! I'm a bit unsure about her really long name - it's a bit cliche, but I liked reading about the conflict with James/Albus.

I like the idea of this friendship group. Certainly never heard of Scorpius being called "He is my teddy-bear" but something about that just made me smile. Another little bit I liked was her sending Ginny an owl (good way to get back at James!). I really look forward to reading the rest~

- Charlotte/maskedmuggle
House Cup 2013

Author's Response: I am happy you liked the revised chapter- the first was a tad rough..
As for the long name: my friend Emily and I decided that was how every pure-blood family was if the middle names weren't announced- so you can see I had fun with that...
I like the friendship alot- but now looking back I see I am all three merged into one- Elliey is how I see myself (crazy and clumzy), Scorp is how my teachers see me, and Carr is how my friends describe me.
I hope you do read the rest- there is more to come :)
XOXOX,
LLG


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