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Review:starryskies55 says:
I have only recently started shipping Albus and Scorpius, and this is so cuute! the mirroring of the rain at the beginning was very clever, immediately linking the two characters together, and all the verbs you used to describe the way that Albus and Scorpius were feeling was very poetic and effective, especially the patterning of them.

Your characters were quite well developed for a one shot- and not only in terms of their relationship with each other- we learnt about both their families, plus some tidbits about Albus and Scorpius' immaturity :P

I'm so glad they got a happy ending (so far.. who knows with you, right? but I suppose there is the threat of James) because you wrote two characters so in love it would have been horrific to end it any other way.

I really enjoyed this story too! You wonder writer, you! :D

Author's Response: Albus/Scorpius is awesome. Everyone should ship them. (Even though I love Albus/Lexi and Scorpius/Lily.)

Aww, I'm so glad you liked it. It was my first time writing them when I started this.

Haha, knowing me, I could. But don't worry, this is a stand alone story. Nothing will change.

Thank you so much for leaving a review!


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