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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! You know me. :) It's just taken me a while to get back to reading this story. But here I am now! :D So, let's go over things:

Plot: AHHH! Angelina-chapter! This was so wonderful (as every single chapter of this story is). I loved being "back at Hogwarts" with them. I still feel so sad that they didn't talk before Christmas, and now this? :( Even though I know that they figure it out and end up together, I'm still sad because it hurts and wah...But I did adore the scene in the shop and I wish so much that they could have figured themselves out then. Also, I loved the scene by the lake. It was just one of those moments that anyone who has experienced can recognize. It made me feel nostalgic and I really think you did a wonderful job with it.

Great Lines: I have to mention several because you're so clever and I love it--
~"stepped off a curb and been hit by the Knight bus" NICE.
~"automated Page-Turning Charm" I WANT ONE. So clever. :)
~"There was no use in wallowing over spilt potions--though she was certain whoever came up with that phrase had never had never been taught by Professor Snape" Yes, I'm sure they hadn't. ;)
~"caused Flutterby bushes to sprout up in her stomach" Clever again. :)
~ "feeling of squeezing through the laws of nature as if they were a jelly mould" What a great way to describe that!
~"She had called the shot--she didn't deserve to cry." This moved me. So amazing. I just...ahh... :(

Characterization: As absolutely always, I adore your Angelina. She's lovely. And George is perfect as well. I felt so terrible for him in this chapter, even though I know they fall in love eventually. You just make me connect with these people. :)

Descriptions: I could totally see the scene by the lake and the scene in the shop. Wonderful imagery!

Emotions: SADNESS! That's an emotion for you! That's all I feel after this. :( It was so splendid, but I'm so upset!

Interactions: The scene in the shop was beautiful. I loved the moment between them when George had his heart broken and Angelina hated herself for doing it. That was so poignant. I love watching these characters grow.

Style: Lovely. You know that. :) I think you're an amazing writer and I can't wait to read the next chapter. So, off I go! :D

--Emily

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