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Review:academica says:
Oh my goodness, the plot thickens! I love how you've taken the two cliche hysterical women and really drawn them out to their full level of crazy. It was funny how businesslike Cho was and how she resorted to blackmail just to get the upper hand.

Oh, gosh, the fight between Lavender and Cho was great. I loved how Lavender went from being like a mini Trelawney, talking about chakras and all that, to flying off the handle and yelling at Cho. I could really see the scene unfold in my mind and I sense things are only going to go downhill from him for everyone else, especially Cho and Lavender (well, except the trio. They seem to be doing OK! Haha).

Next one!

Amanda
Ravenclaw
House Cup: Event 6.2


Author's Response: Hi Amanda!

Of course the plot thickens! Haha, I'm so glad that you liked the level of crazy, I wasn't sure if it was too high or not! I had fun playing on Cho's Ravenclaw traits and making her too logical!

Yup, mini-Trelawney Lavender can change suddenly into mini-Voldemort Lavender! I'm glad that you could imagine the scene unfold in your mind as it was a ton of fun to write so yay for that! Yes the trio are ok, but then they never made an appearance so they never got sucked into the crazy at the same extent!

Thanks for another great review!


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