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Review:teh tarik says:
Kayla! Wow. This is an amazing piece! I've read several stories about Remus during his transformation, and yours is right up there with the very best. It's such a short piece, and yet there's so much in it. You've managed to capture Remus' initial pain, and his gradual loss of human control and transition to a more animal, instinctual state. Your use of visual imagery is excellent, and the descriptive paragraphs were beautiful without being overdone - and they were of the right kinds of details - the details that a werewolf would notice.

I love the whole part about Remus' heightened senses. And the bit where the other Marauders appeared was wonderful. It's not all fun and games, there's adventure, but it's a dangerous sort of adventure, a very perilous line that those three are treading, and you've shown this brilliantly.

Amazing story, Kayla!

-teh

Author's Response: Hey, teh!

I'm so glad you like this! This is one of my proudest one-shots (does that even make sense?).

Thank you so much for this amazing review, you really put a big grin on my face! :D

- Kayla. ♥


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