Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
Damn, I felt exceedingly sorry for Barty throughout this story - Bellatrix is so vindictive and evil and just...ugh. I didn't like her here but I thought your writing style was super flawless. You had the perfect balance of dialogue and description and I liked the way you put her slinking words in italics so we as a reader could differentiate what was going on and who was saying what.

Damn gurl, your descriptions were beautiful - I was like wow those are some big words and you made it all sound so poetic. Such a great flow as well for the story and there were absolutely no grammar or spelling mistakes that I saw. Brilliant job and well done, lovely read.

Author's Response: Bluebirdbrigade,

First of all, I would like to thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm so pleased to know that you enjoyed reading this, and as a writer, it's the people's pleasure that not only keeps me writing, but having the actual courage to post my work up for others to read. It's a refreshing feeling really--to write my heart out and be able to share it with others.

Barty! Honestly, as much as he had made wrongs in cannon, I love him to death. He's one of those villains that I can't help but coo over, because in reality, I think he was just lost. For some reason, I think he had a sorry childhood, having an overbearing father who gave more of a damn about his work than his own kid, leaving Barty to wander into a pretty crappy walk of life. And from there, things just twisted for the worst.

As for Bellatrix, I have a love-hate relationship with her. I love her dangerous nature, being the one to lead her pack, only second in command to Voldemort is how I think of it. I love how her rather 'eff you!" attitude. But I hate her for killing Sirius. Anywho, I aimed to make her merciless in this piece. It's a shame though that I couldn't make her any darker. I tried to make her more evil and sinister, but validation staff told me that it was too crude for the archives, therefore I had to tone it down a few notches.

Thank you for the compliments on my descriptions! Not to sound cocky, but I honestly pride myself on them; it makes up for my weaknesses on creating suitable dialogue for my characters, which I will admit, I have the greatest trouble on still.

I am just so glad that you enjoyed this! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. It really does mean a lot to me.

PhoenixPulse


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 812
Submit Report: