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Review:Beeezie says:
Yeah, this cliffhanger? Not nice. Not nice at all.

Which really makes it the perfect way to end the story, especially since you got the sequel up and posted pretty quickly. (I cannot wait to see how that goes.) The fact that you ended the story this way actually makes me appreciate the last chapter even more than I already did, because it really was the end of Brienne's story for this book. I wasn't really sure what the epilogue would entail, but I liked it a lot! It was very intriguing, and left a lot of unanswered questions for me in a way that makes me hungry to get into the sequel!

The one suggestion I would make is that I think you could go through and tighten up the description a bit. There were a few points where I wasn't really sure who was speaking, and I would have liked to get a bit of a better image in my mind of the setting. Overall, though, excellent job!

HOUSE CUP 2013 - RAVENCLAW

Author's Response: Hi! Wow, I woke up to a deluge of reviews from my favourite reviewers, so I'm super happy right now!

I'm really glad you liked this and didn't think it was super overdramatic. Thank you for the tip, I will go through it and try to tighten it up if I can :)

Thank you very much!


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