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Review:Lottie says:
In the first chapter you talked about Freya's mom being an Auror and her dad working with potions..earlier in this chapter she had a dream about playing quidditch when she was younger with her parents..none of this would have happened if she was a muggleborn. Get your story straight.

Author's Response: I'm glad you pointed that out. I'm getting the story sort of mixed with my own feelings, for example, when Freya is in the library.

I was trying to get across what I'd be like if I were at Hogwarts (reading everything there is to know about the wizarding world) but that would link to being muggleborn and I obviously forgot that Freya isn't muggleborn.

I've edited it now. I need to get in to the habit of fully checking that everything spot on, I know.

Thank you for pointing it, much appreciated :)

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