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Review:randomwriter says:
Hello there :)

This was a very sweet story. Innocent friendship, nothing more, nothing less. I really liked it as it felt like a very honest piece. It was quite well written too.

Just one tiny bit of CC. In some parts, it was difficult to figure out who was talking. I had to re-read the conversation a couple of times to really understand that.

All in a all, a really sweet story :) And I really liked how you ended it!

Author's Response: Thanks for stopping by!

Yeah, the main inspiration for this was wanting to do a friendship piece in contrast to the many romantic Rose/Scorpius stories on the archive. I'm glad you felt like I did a good job with it!

Well, I kind of struggled with not wanting to inundate the reader with dialogue tags. I'm sure it was a little challenging to follow the trade-offs when grades were being discussed, but hopefully you can see where I'm coming from :)

Thanks again for your kind review!


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