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Review:Moony7 says:
Can you just get on with it already! The whole break-up with Harry and Ginny doesn't feel real. You threw that wrinkle in to exaggerate the drama more.

Ginny knew once dating other people wouldn't help her get over Harry. And still she insists on trying to make that work.

The whole part with Oliver disgusted me (no matter how cool a character he is.) It just felt that Ginny betrayed Harry when Harry hasn't really done a thing (not saying that this is as much Harry's fault as Ginny's. He was harsh in how he broke up with her and keeping a cold distance).

Why can't you just lock Harry and Ginny in a room and let them apologize for how stupid they're being.

I like your story I really do, just not this latest twist in Harry and Ginny's relationship it was progressing in excellent and real direction. Then you just cut the line.That has become the only weakness in your story and for me its just killed it for me.

Sorry if I come off a little harsh, your entitled your own story writing and its really good writing, but Harry/Ginny needs work it doesn't feel real to me. Keep up the good work with the Weasley family! Include more Teddy in the story yeah!

Sorry again for bashing your story, heck maybe I am just exaggerating over one plot-line too much. Keep up the good work! It really is a nice story.

Mischief Managed!

Author's Response: I guess that when you think that someone cheated on you, you just don't see the point of waiting around for them. Ginny chose to date Oliver because she wanted to take her mind off of Harry, because she wanted to move on, but as you can tell, she is now realising that it just doesn't work.

It's really rare that two people (even if they are meant to be) get together at 17 and stay together forever. I had them break up because I wanted to make it more realistic, and because I felt like they, and especially Harry, hadn't really learn how to deal with this kind of problem before, as they've been busy elsewhere. That's why I think they'd handle things poorly and that things would get blown out of proportion.

However, if you're getting tired of this drama, I think you'll enjoy the next couple of chapters. I'm glad that you still enjoy the story, and thank you so much for this review and for letting me know what you think! I really appreciate it :)


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