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Review:Beeezie says:
Oh, god. This made me want to cry.

I do want to take a moment to mention that the way you formatted your dialogue toward the beginning seemed a little off to me - "grins" isn't a dialogue tag, so "Jean grins" should follow a period, not a comma - and I don't believe it's proper to end sentences in a comma unless you have a dialogue tag, period. (At least, I've never seen it.)

Okay. Anyway.

I really loved this. It took me a moment to realize exactly who the main characters of this story were, but once I did, I knew you would do them justice, and you did. I especially liked the way you depicted Hermione's mother reaction to the memory charm - it's a really interesting look at it, especially since none of the major characters had their memories wiped in the books (that I recall, anyway). I also loved the way you described Australia - it really did the travel theme justice. I felt like I was there.

This was so nicely done, and I wish I had time to wax poetic, but you're a Claw and you understand our time crunch. ♥

- HOUSE CUP 2013 RAVENCLAW -

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