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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
Oh my god.

Bahaha, this was hilarious! I mean, I knew from when I read the title that this would be something special but you really put a lot of thought into this entry and it was totally entertaining and funny. I really liked the unique and creative spin you put on the whole travel element and it's definitely the most unusual but completely interesting entry that I've seen from anyone taking part in the house cup. I loved the part where Voldie was like 'what did I ever do to you.oh yeah.' Genius.

I didn't see any spelling mistakes here but I think for CC I would say I would have liked to see more of a consistent description. It was sometimes a bit bulky in one area and then totally dialogue filled in the next. But even with this I thought you had some really nice flow going on and I just enjoyed it in general!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review!

I kind of threw this story together quickly to finish it in time for the house cup, so I didnt really get a chance to read through it, but those are some good suggestions.

Thanks again!

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