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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
This was a really funny but adorable story. I love the banter that went on between Sirius and James and how Sirius was super bored and was trying to get James to be mischievous with him. I found it super cute that the main reason James didn't want to do any pranking was because Lily didn't like it which you know is a very 'in love' thing to do because you don't want to upset the girl you like. Sirius's responses ad jibes were really funny and very in character and I especially like the part where he decides to force James by making his broom hit him over the head. James's own favourite thing is now clubbing him over the head, brilliant :P

Overall, I really enjoyed this story. I don't think I saw one single spelling error or grammar mistake and the flow of this story was so smooth and just got better and better as it went along. I thought it was really funny and a very interesting idea. I like the way you included the war too, made it seem more realistic and drew my focus a little more too to see the details :)

Maz

Author's Response: First of all, I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond. Even though though the house cup ended a few weeks ago, I'm still trying to catch up on everything!

I tried to make this story a little humorous, so I'm glad you enjoyed the humor! And it definitely helps that James and Sirius are both silly sometimes.

Really? You didn't catch any mistakes? That's great!

I'm glad you enjoyed the mention of the war! Stuff like that is usually on people's minds.

Thanks for the review!



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