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Review:Beeezie says:
Ha. When I saw that we had to read stories written prior to 2009, I immediately said, "Violet!" and then found your profile and started scanning for stories. Every time I read something of yours I love it, but I don't have enough time to read as much as I wish I could.

So!

I really, really liked this story. The writing was a little less awe-inspiring than I'm used to seeing from you, but that makes sense, really - this is a much older story than the others I've read! Even so, your grammar was flawless, your descriptions were great - I could so see Lily flipping the pages irritably in my mind - and it flowed beautifully. I think that in a lot of ways this is exactly what a one-shot should be - it's a cute little snapshot that I, as a reader, can insert into the story I know from the books. This was a great, believable concept, and I think you captured James perfectly.

Great job!

(This is a very lame review. Sorry. You're a Puff, you understand, you guys have been in the same boat as us lately.)

- HOUSE CUP 2013 RAVENCLAW -

Author's Response: A review from you can never be lame! It was a fantastic surprise to see you reviewing my stories and I'm really glad that you enjoyed them too. :D

You're right that this story has less punch to it. I was trying to write something normal and cute, and as you can see, neither of these is in my area. I'm glad that you still liked the descriptions - I remember enjoying writing the parts where Lily flips the pages while James is talking, obviously trying to ignore him (and probably succeeding too!). James is always fun to write in the first person, though I haven't been able to do it for a while now...

Before I ponder on into oblivion, thank you again for reading and reviewing! It's been great to hear from you! ^_^


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