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Review:starryskies55 says:
oh my god I have goosebumps. This was amazing!

I don't think I've really read many stories about Lily in the afterlife, but this one was incredibly haunting. your short sentences and the juxtapositioning of words really added to this and was incredibly well done.
I especially liked that you implied that Lily was a little selfish- she didn't want to go on in a world without Harry or James, so she chose to die. I don't really see her as selfish, but its quite interesting and it was a good contrast for Harry who died in an act that would actually save his friends.

This was very well written, very moving, and I really enjoyed it. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
To be honest, I don't know where it came from, but I knew I hadn't read much like it so I thought why not? It seemed to work out okay. I really did try with the sentence structure- thank you for noticing :)
Yeah. I mean, I know JK always said that love in a relationship is nothing compared to love parents have for their children, but I do think that her love for James was powerful enough to shatter her thoughts into just 'don't let Harry die'. Thanks.
Thank you for reviewing- I'm glad you enjoyed it!


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