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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi, Iím here with your second of five reviews!

I really loved the backstory you provided for Victoire Ė it really made me laugh. That is quite an art, giving a reader lots of information and them not getting bored. I really loved all of it, though I think the thoughts from Bill about why his daughter loved to travel were the best. The scenes where he was looking over his daughterís cot were so adorable and then to see her gallivanting off to Ireland helped me understand why he was like that.

One thing which was really great and added to the travel theme were all the Irish things in this story. The Giantís Causeway, the whiskey and the accent! Everything merged together and made something really lovely. Though it did make me want to go and see the Giantís Causeway because it sounded really cool and now I have an Irish accent running through my head!

Iím sort of glad that Teddy and Victoire were broken up for two reasons. The first being condescending Alexander could then attempt to flirt with her which made me laugh and then itís sort of done that pairing. Oh yes, I forgot to say that the idea of Teddy moping around after her made me chuckle in an ever so slightly evil way. I never thought him to be a crier so it was great mental images!

The letter from Dom was really sweet and loved getting to know more about her family. I feel as if I knew all of their unique personalities really well for a one-shot. Thatís such a rare thing so I really must congratulate you on that!

Yay for the random Scot! They always add more fun to any party and this Finn guy certainly did. I have a Scottish accent in my head now, which I guess is better than an Irish as Iím part Scottish so it wonít be too weird going around and saying wee bonnie lass :P

I know youíre Canadian, so Iíll try and remember to be nicer and not get them confused with Americans in the future. Next time, if in doubt Iíll ask if theyíre Canadian first not American. I really liked how you played with the country stereotypes in this story it added a lot of fun and humour and, again, fitted with the theme of travel!

That was another really great one-shot! ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hello again! :)

Ah, I'm so glad you liked the story and Victoire's character and backstory! I had a lot of fun coming up with the basis for her experiences; Bill was definitely one of the best parts to write. I'm glad you thought it was cute and made sense for him to think so! :)

Haha, I'm so pleased you liked the Irish details as well! The story was pretty much just a re-telling of my trip to the giant's causeway, minus the giant involvement of course! Haha, you should definitely go and visit it!

Ok, I'm very pleased you liked the fact they were broken up as I wanted to do a bit of a spin on the typical Teddy/Vic. Not all relationships survive high school after all, though it's not necessarily over for them yet. Haha, I scoffed a little at Teddy being all mopey as well! :P

I'm glad you felt like you got to know some of the other Delacour-Weasleys and enjoyed Dom. It was so much fun imagining their personalities and giving them little quirks.

Haha, I'm glad you liked Finn, and the accent! And yes, there are some of my countryfolk out there who get quite offended, I do think it's an honest mistake to think we're American however! :P I'm glad you liked the stereotypes about the different cultures and that it helped enhance the theme, as I said it was mostly based on my own experiences so very fun to write. :)

Thank you for another wonderful review my dear! :D


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