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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
Well first up, I loved the way you incorporated the theme of travel into your story to go alongside the HC prompt, it was very unusal and interesting and creative. The use of time travel was really cool and I couldn't help but think of Marty McFly from Back to the future - which I love. I loved the descriptions you used and the way you talked about the janitors and the epic mess ahaha, it was really well done.

The flow of this story really worked well and I couldn't help but think that this would be a great story to podcast. You explored so may different writing techniques and I thought the dialogue, for me, was super realistic. Overall, it was a great, lovable story with no grammar or spelling mistakes that I saw! Great Job!

Maz

Author's Response: Thank you! It's nice to hear that you think the story was creative, and that the descriptions were good :) I'm glad you liked the time travel aspect too. Someone else mentioned Back to the Future in their review as well and to be honest I didn't even think about that as I wrote it, but I can see why you made the connection!

I'm glad you thought the dialogue was realistic - that was the part I was most unsure about, actually. And I'd never thought about how this would work as a podcast, hmm. It's an interesting idea! Thank you for such a lovely review!!


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