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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
Wow, you really delicately told a very serious topic and is an issue in today's society. I love the way you explored the dialogue and you had some great descriptions about the bruises and the scars and how much of an impact they had on her on the inside. She is clearly quite damaged after what she has been through and I felt truly sorry for her. I really sympathised with Lily and hoped that she would find the strength to make it through. The ending was sad and harsh but delicately done.

As CC I'd say work a little on your grammar as there was a little bit of confusion in your tenses. There were times when you lost focus but you brought it back and it was an enjoyable read :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive critism, nobody ever tells me the flaws -.- so
I have nothing to work on.
I'm glad you liked it even though it was dark, and sinister...
Thanks for staying with Lily until the very end,
Nadia


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