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Review:Erised says:
Hey there!

Goodness, this is so beautiful and so sad. I felt as if you really connected with Remus as a character and so managed to write him in such a perfect way. He is a very multi-faceted character and I felt that you definitely expressed that with his sorrow and anger at himself for feeling like he failed his friends. To have his life change so drastically so quickly has clearly taken a toll on him emotionally and you wrote it ridiculously well.

I also thought that the funeral was done really well - through Remus' POV we see how many people are there which is really nice to see as Lily and James would have been such a celebrated couple. I definitely felt that you managed to convey so much emotion in one small but excellent piece with your lovely dialogue and descriptions.

Greta job on this, well done!

Author's Response: Hi!

Eek, I think I may have died of happiness while reading the first two lines. Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you connected with him and I saw that with how deeply you analysed him.

It seemed right to do it from Remus' POV as he went through so much with the pair of them, and I'm glad that you liked it too. Thank you so much for these lovely compliments they really made my day! ♥

-Kiana


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