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Review:GinnyPotterForever says:
This was a great chapter!

For a moment I wondered where any of the characters would face a snake pit. Then I remembered - Malfoy Manor. Poor Harry.

It was interesting to learn more about Draco. How he acts around others has changed drastically - the poor boy must be very confused. One minute he's downright mean, then next he's helping cover up the biggest kind of secret.

Harry doesn't know what Marlene did to Sirius, or why Sirius was frosty to her. But, he does know that Sirius and Marlene were close before - so why doesn't he ask her what the problem is? Or is it Marlene who keeps avoiding him? If that is the case, she's a big coward.

And Severus. His indecision on testifying at Sirius's trial has got him stuck between a rock and a hard place. He hasn't even told Dumbledore, who might just be able to solve the problem.

Can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Haha, yes, and it turned out to be a more literal snake pit than I'd intended. :P I know - he's coping, though. :)
I feel so, so sorry for poor Draco - he has changed drastically, but he's also retained bits of his old self and they pop up just as frequently. :S Yes, as Harry said, one moment he's as rude and bossy as Hydrus, and the next he's perfectly friendly and doing favours. :S
No, Harry doesn't know - Sirius didn't have a chance to tell him privately (he wouldn't risk the Aurors hearing) and I also doubt he'd have wanted Harry to worry. :/ Things about what's going on between them will be a bit clearer after the next chapter. :)
It has indeed - he's having a bit of a morality crisis now, and time's running out for him to work out what to do about the whole thing. :S No, but telling Dumbledore would mean doing Sirius an enormous favour, and it would also get Snape into trouble for keeping secrets. :P
It'll be up next week. :)
Thank you so much for the review!

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