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Review:Akussa says:
Hi there!

This was a rather enjoyable story! I really like the way you presented Regulus. It's not a character we know much about and I think you did a great job in here because he feels real. The nuances of his character and emotions was believable and touching.

I like that Regulus chose a muggle way of travelling; it adds to the story and the dept of the character.

If I could add one small bit of constructive criticism, it would be about the format. The reading experience would be easier if you added spaces between the dialogues.

Great job though, I enjoyed it a lot!

Akussa for Gryffindor in the House Cup 2013 :)

Author's Response: Hello!

It's great to hear that you enjoyed this! I've never written Regulus before and I really enjoyed exploring him a bit for this, so I'm glad that that came across in the writing... He's such an interesting character...

Well writing about him just Apparating would've been kinda boring wouldn't it? haha. But I liked the idea of him being reduced to the level of Muggles here.

Hmmm, okay, I'll have a look at the format. I'm not entirely sure what you mean by dialogues though?

I'm glad you enjoyed this, and thankyou for leaving a review!

-Bethany


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