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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hey!

I thought this was a really good one-shot and to say you got this out in such a small amount of time is awesome!

I thought the slight lack of coherence until the end was done on purpose as it seemed to fit in well with Regulus' character and what's going on with him in this. Maybe it wasn't intentional but it fit the story well.

I like how Regulus knows this is his last journey but he wants to do it as he has this greater purpose. You honestly wrote it so well!

One tiny tiny typo I did notice:

'He was a man who casually signed his life over to force too vast for him to escape' I think you need 'a force'.

This was really well written and I think a really inventive twist on the travel theme! Well done!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hello Lauren!

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! Hehe I think maybe the lack of coherence was a mixture between Regulus' overwrought mind and mine?! I'd never really thought about Regulus that much before writing this, but he is such an interesting character...

Ooh thanks for pointing out the typo! I'll be sure to go and fix it.

Thank you for leaving this review; it was really lovely!

-Bethany


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