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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
MAZ- I love you and I love your writing even more :D

You touch on key areas here such as the middle child feeling left out and the whole scenario children go through when theyre younger of wanting to move out even if its just for a brief period of time. They all want to run away to punish their parents yet they always come back in the end. I just think this is wonderful as you've shown Dom's feelings.

It was sad to see that Bill, Fleur and Victorie had all dismissed her ideas and that was part of the reason why she felt so lonely and why she had to go. It would be interesting though if you'd have maybe mentioned why she couldn't hang around with her cousins or even have mentioned that they were a little too young.

Its cute though when she meets Joey! At first I was like oh Dom just run away but after realising he was little too it just seemed so sweet and it was cute to see that a little friendship would form.

Well done :D

Love!

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