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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi dear! :)

This was such a cute little story, and I loved reading about it. Luna is such a difficult character to portray but I think you wrote her brilliantly: she's compassionate, thoughtful, quirky and of course a little confusing. However, she also does seem more mature than in the books, which makes sense as some years have passed and she's grown up a bit. The quote from her mother was one of my favourite bits as well, and really fit perfectly with how I imagined her from the books. I would also think that Luna's mother would often be on her mind, so her presence in the story was lovely. When Rolf quoted the sentence back to her it was just so cute and fitting.

Also, I like how you chose the train as the place where they met, and I could really picture it in my mind. Wizards interacting with Muggles is always interesting to read and I think Luna would be one pureblood who would feel comfortable navigating among them. I enjoyed her confusion about Rolf being a wizard and looking at the Quibbler, it was a nice touch. :)

The mention of Neville was funny as well, but I liked how Rolf seemed to help Luna get over him, especially when she decides to spend time with him instead of going over to Neville's. It felt very natural, and I'd love to see more of him as a character, he just seems like such an interesting and wonderful character who just begs for more screen time! The last sentence really rounded the story off so well, making the end of the journey both an ending and a beginning for the future, and the perfect opening to a lovely life spent together collecting and examining strange creatures.

Great job with this adorable one-shot! :)

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