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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi! :)

Aw, this was so cute! I'm really glad I got to read a story written in an unusual, Post-Hogwarts/Pre-Next Gen. era. It was so refreshing, and really interesting to see Ron and Hermione as young parents. I think you wrote them really well: I loved the dynamics between them, in which they're both loving and attentive to each other but also easily annoyed, and of course Hermione still bosses Ron around. Hermione's annoyance and going into dictator-mom mode was great and reminded me of family events when I was really young. Also, little details like how Molly loves minding her grandkids and how Rose wants to go play with Al were great in creating a family dynamic and adding rich detail to the story.

The whole premise of the trip: to re-visit a place Hermione had been with her late father, was very sweet and poignant. I love how uncertain and really human she came across, and her uncertainity and disappointment that the trip wouldn't be what she imagined. Also, it was a great touch that they took Muggle transport, and I loved how Hermione wouldn't let Ron drive. The last line was a great punchline to the story and really summed up their relationship in a few light yet powerful words, I loved it! :)

Anyway, this was a great little read and I really enjoyed it and reading about the Granger-Weasleys. The characterization was so spot-on and the writing clear to read and well-flowing. Lovely job, my dear! :)

Author's Response: Hi there, dear!

Thank you so much for your thoughtful, amazing review, and I'm sorry it has taken me this long to respond to it!

Aww! I'm glad you thought it was cute! I agree, you don't see many fics about Ron and Hermione as young parents (although I'm sure there's some out there), so I kind of felt like this was uncharted territory when I was writing it. I'm glad you liked it so much!

It really makes me happy to hear that you think I wrote the couple very well. This was my first Romione so I wasn't sure how it'd turn out - I'm glad you liked it!

I'm glad that you thought the whole idea was sweet, and that you liked the ending! As for the muggle transport, I had just taken a road trip a day or two before writing this, and I literally got the inspiration for this while I was on that trip, so that really had a lot to do with it! :P

Thank you so much for the compliments, and for this amazing review! ♥


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