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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :)

I absolutely loved this, it was pure Weasley antics perfection. I really enjoyed the length and format of the story, and felt like it flowed really naturally and smoothly. You managed to create such strong characters and complete a narrative arc in such a short one-shot, and it was so well constructed and well written. :)

I love the characterization of the Weasleys, like Mr. W's childlike excitement was written just right. I enjoyed how the story began with explaining his love for Muggle objects and giving some context instead of just taking that character trait for granted, like his reminiscing over the Ford Anglia. I really loved the line where George yelled that Ginny was too young to get married, it was just so typical and perfectly in the spirit of George and the other brothers, as was poor Ginny's indignation. And typical humble Harry, wanting to treat the Weasleys! That was a great introduction, and made a lot of sense as only he and Hermione who were raised by Muggles would think of taking Muggle transport. Hermione was also just perfect, I love how strict she was and of course she planned their itinerary meticulously! Really, you understand and write all of our beloved characters so well. :)

The descriptions of Arthur's embarrassing actions at the airport made me laugh as well, and were so silly and a pleasure to read. And the last line about the shed tied the entire story together perfectly and was just the most lovely of endings.

You should be really proud of this and especially your characterization and witty writing. I loved it, and I'm so glad I got a chance to read and review it! :) Amazing job! :D

Author's Response: Wow! This is such an amazing review, firstly, thank you so much!

I am forever worrying that my characterisation isn't right, we all love the characters that JKR created so much and I'd hate to do them an injustice so whenever someone tells me they think I did a good job it really makes me happy!

I had so much fun writing this, Arthur is a really great character to write and I really didn't expect it to be so well reviewed. Thank you so so much

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