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Review:Trundlebug says:
This was a very good bit of writing, and I liked that you kind of presented it as a travel guide for the magical world. You kept it very short but still managed a large selection of places and details that made it interesting.

I don't know anything about your character, but I didn't really need to for the story. I actually think it works well with an unknown, and that it even helps it achieve its goal.

A good read, and perhaps an interesting first chapter?


Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I had fun writing this story, imagining what sights could be seen and what could be done there. I find myself planning vacations I never actually take because I have more fun planning them out! :)

I will definitely think about continuing the story though I may need to finish a few other stories first. :)

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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