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Review:Trundlebug says:
This was a very fun travel story, and I really liked seeing Hermione and Ron as parents. It's well-written and I only saw a few minor typos and glitches here and there.

All of your characterizations are written very well. Ron and Hermione seem spot on--to me at least--and I like what you have done with Rose and Scorpious, who I don't know very much about. They are all interesting and quite distinct.

I enjoyed watching pure-blood Scorpious freak out over all the muggle stuff, and found it interesting to consider that Ron, who is also pure-blood, felt much the same. I could certainly see them having a good relationship, as father and son-in-law, and their camaraderie made the story fun.

You threw me off there a bit when it witched over to Ginny, but I quickly understood what you were doing and it works well. The letter was great and I liked that you threw in the little educational points that Hermione would certainly sneak into any correspondence.

A fantastic read

Ken

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :) The bit about Ginny was something that just happened in the spur of the moment, when I realized 5000 words or less isn't going to cut it! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

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