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Review:Trundlebug says:
Regulus is so interesting; he is the Black brother we don't really know. This was a good travel story. You have taken what would likely be one of the most important trips of this young man's life and described his thoughts and feelings very well. I like the progression of it, as he makes ready and eventually leaves, and that his thoughts are his constant company. I particularly liked that you showed that he was not wholly evil or as loyal to Voldemort as he thinks he is. This is important, because we certainly learn a thing or two about his loyalties later on.

He didn't hate his brother, but he acted in accordance to what was expected of him. And you even had him say thank you to the house elf, demonstrating a bond between them.

Overall its a good story. It has its little flaws and hiccups like any rough work, but the most important detail is there: it's enjoyable to read.

I certainly enjoyed it

Ken

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review!
Courtney:)


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