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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hey! :)

This was an adorable one-shot! I really enjoyed reading it!

However, I think you might want to have a read-over. There were quite a few grammatical errors, or you left out a few words. But nothing a read-over won't fix. They weren't so glaringly obvious that ruined the piece for me, it just made it a bit jumpy. But they weren't massive issues, don't worry. :)

So yeah, Australia! Finally! I've been reading so many and haven't read any from Australia (my homeland) yet, so finally seeing something about Australia is a relief!

You described Australia well. I've been to most states, so you pretty much got the overall theme. I don't know if you intended it to be a specific place, but I imagined Perth from your descriptions. It's a lovely place. :)

This was an adorable one-shot, I liked Emily and Hugo's relationship developing, and their parallels about their mothers was a nice touch. :)

So yeah, I enjoyed reading this story! You write very nicely!

- Kayla. :)

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