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Review:purplepotter77 says:
Here for the HC review-a-thon!

I loved this. It was so beautiful and sad but hopeful at the same time. The part where people are talking about Neville and she doesn't know who they're talking about just makes me so sad. I also love how she feels a connection to Frank, but at the same time, she doesn't know what it is or why it's there.

I loved the little bits of Frank and Alice's life before and during the war that you inserted. Alice, Frank, and Neville before Alice and Frank get tortured are such a perfect, lovely little family, and knowing what happens to them later makes me so, so sad.

This story was so bittersweet, and I loved the part at the end where Alice finally knows who Neville is! The scene where she looks in the mirror is also very touching. The way you made all their emotions and memories come out in this story is wonderful.

It was really a pleasure to read Alice and Frank's beautiful story!

Author's Response: Hello!

Thank you so much for your compliments! They really mean a lot to me! ♥

It was a very bittersweet one-shot, I do admit. I kept getting sad and then happy again. :p

Anyway, thank you for this lovely review and I'm so sorry for taking an age to respond!

- Kayla. :)

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